Hawayen hii hain jo udaa ley jayengi Tang dil logon kii tang baaton ko Udane do patangon ko, koi baat nahin Sab milengee iik din bhool kar Jaaton ko...
As I said you inspire Saumya.. very well written thought..
@Divesh :coz caste discrimination is so much into our thoughts,our deeds,our actions that people resort to 'honourably' kill their sons and daughters....this piece is expressing my agony for the same.
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ReplyDeleteHawayen hii hain jo udaa ley jayengi
ReplyDeleteTang dil logon kii tang baaton ko
Udane do patangon ko, koi baat nahin
Sab milengee iik din bhool kar Jaaton ko...
As I said you inspire Saumya.. very well written thought..
कुछ अलग सी सोच...जाति पर अच्छा प्रहार
ReplyDeleteOh, so true. Love the power and skill with which you write, and the strong messages you always convey. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteजी बहुत बढ़िया......
ReplyDeleteपंक्ति केवल तीन
और इतने में भी
बजा दी जात-पात की बीन.....
कुंवर जी,
Padkar accha lagaa. Caste-ism should have been ended much before 2010. Now people are coming ahead . Its a good sign.
ReplyDeleteBy the way post was meaningful.
@Divesh :coz caste discrimination is so much into our thoughts,our deeds,our actions that people resort to 'honourably' kill their sons and daughters....this piece is expressing my agony for the same.
ReplyDelete@Ramesh Sood Sir:well written optimistic thought sir...yeah we can HOPE...thanks!
ReplyDelete@Sangeeta ji:thanks a lot!
ReplyDelete@Aayushi: thank you so much...stay happy :)
ReplyDelete@Kunwarji :thanks a lot!
ReplyDelete@Virendra ji: thank you so much!
ReplyDeleteबहुत सुन्दर त्रिवेणी... तीसरी लाईन मे जातिवाद पर अच्छा प्रहार..
ReplyDeletethank you sir!
ReplyDeleteसौम्या !
ReplyDeleteयह रचना नही अपितु वर्त्तमान को चित्रित करती सूक्ति है ।
प्रशंसनीय ।
thank you sir!
ReplyDeleteTotally in sync with what I think! Awesome metre!
ReplyDelete:) Sad.
ReplyDeleteHello Saumya,
ReplyDeleteA thought with a depth! :)
Nice work done...!
Regards,
Dimple
@mangoman: thanks!
ReplyDelete@phoenix: thank you for the read :)
ReplyDelete@Dimps: thanks ya!
ReplyDeleteas always...superb n thought provoking!
ReplyDelete@maverick: thank you so much...it really feels good to be appreciated honestly :)
ReplyDeletebahut khoobsurt
ReplyDeletemahnat safal hui
yu hi likhate raho tumhe padhana acha lagata hai.
or haan deri ke liye sorry.
@sanjay ji: thanks a lot!
ReplyDeleteawesome saumya.... :)
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