Hawayen hii hain jo udaa ley jayengi Tang dil logon kii tang baaton koUdane do patangon ko, koi baat nahin Sab milengee iik din bhool kar Jaaton ko...As I said you inspire Saumya.. very well written thought..
कुछ अलग सी सोच...जाति पर अच्छा प्रहार
Oh, so true. Love the power and skill with which you write, and the strong messages you always convey. Keep up the good work!
जी बहुत बढ़िया......पंक्ति केवल तीनऔर इतने में भीबजा दी जात-पात की बीन.....कुंवर जी,
Padkar accha lagaa. Caste-ism should have been ended much before 2010. Now people are coming ahead . Its a good sign.By the way post was meaningful.
@Divesh :coz caste discrimination is so much into our thoughts,our deeds,our actions that people resort to 'honourably' kill their sons and daughters....this piece is expressing my agony for the same.
@Ramesh Sood Sir:well written optimistic thought sir...yeah we can HOPE...thanks!
@Sangeeta ji:thanks a lot!
@Aayushi: thank you so much...stay happy :)
@Kunwarji :thanks a lot!
@Virendra ji: thank you so much!
बहुत सुन्दर त्रिवेणी... तीसरी लाईन मे जातिवाद पर अच्छा प्रहार..
thank you sir!
सौम्या !यह रचना नही अपितु वर्त्तमान को चित्रित करती सूक्ति है ।प्रशंसनीय ।
Totally in sync with what I think! Awesome metre!
Hello Saumya,A thought with a depth! :)Nice work done...!Regards,Dimple
@phoenix: thank you for the read :)
@Dimps: thanks ya!
as always...superb n thought provoking!
@maverick: thank you so much...it really feels good to be appreciated honestly :)
bahut khoobsurtmahnat safal huiyu hi likhate raho tumhe padhana acha lagata hai.or haan deri ke liye sorry.
@sanjay ji: thanks a lot!
awesome saumya.... :)
Thankyou for reading...:)