Monday, June 7, 2010

ज़िन्दगी...


















'दिल' और 'दिमाग' में उलझनें बढ़ गयीं थीं,
साँसों की डोर में भी गिरहें पड़ गयीं थीं
आज बैठकर सुलझाया है सब कुछ
ऐ ज़िन्दगी तू हमें रास आने लगी है!

माथे पर कुछ सिलवटें बेहद फिजूल थीं,
पलकों की छाँव में सिर्फ यादों की धूल थी 
आज बैठकर मिटाया है सब कुछ
ऐ ज़िन्दगी तू हमें लुभाने लगी है!

हाथ की लकीरों पर वक़्त की खरोंचे थीं,
लबों पर मुसकुराहट भी ज़ख्म सरीखी थीं 
आज 'उम्मीद' का मरहम लगाया है सब पर
ऐ ज़िन्दगी तू हमें अपनाने लगी है!

ऐ ज़िन्दगी तू हमें रास आने लगी है!

~Saumya

गिरहें=knot,खरोंचे=scratches


27 comments:

  1. hmmmm.........saumya is kavita ko padhkar jindgi hamen bhi raas aane lagi hai.....aur bhaane lagi hai...theek tumhaari kavitaa kee tarah.....

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  2. "आज उम्मीद का मरहम लगाया है सब पर
    ऐ ज़िन्दगी तू हमें अपनाने लगी है!"

    ji bahut badhiya manobhaav....
    ek saarthak soch ko darshaati rachna!
    kunwar ji,

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  3. bahut bahut pyaari rachna ..sab kuch haar kar bhi jaise kuch jeet k sukoon me likhi hai ..bahut badhiya ..yahi jindgi hai :)

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  4. bahut achi kavita hai Saumya...maine abhi kuchh dino se hi tumhara blog padhna shuru kiya...sari hi kavitaon men jo ek ummeed ki kiran aur parivartan ka ahwan dikhta hai, wo sabse prabhavit karne wali baat hai...isi tarah likhti raho...ummeed hai padhne wale inse kuchh sandesh awashya lenge...

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  5. thank you so much everyone!...God bless!..:)

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  6. हिम्मत ना हारने वाली सोच.. दरअसल जिंदगी में उतार चढ़ाव तो आते ही है.. पर उन सबसे उबरकर जो फिर से जिंदगी जी ले.. वही इंसान है..
    बहुत अच्छे से प्रस्तुत की है ये भावनाए..

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  7. I'm happy for you that everything is o.k. in your life as I get the sense from your this nice poem. These lines might not belong to your life , in that case Sorry for taking things otherwise. Actully, Somya ji It happens with almost everyone and it feels great when things become normal again. I wish you all the best. Waiting for your next one. I'm in the habit of reading something new all the time. The new look of your blog is very appealing/attractive.

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  8. suraj ki kiranein aaj subah is dhara par...
    jindagi ki nayi ashayein le kar aayi hai..
    saumya teri ye panktiyan padh kar..
    jindagi bhi muskurane lagi hai...

    a nice poen again ...
    keep it up saumya..

    Devesh....

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  9. A picture with oozing enthusiasm, the sun shining bright on the new template and a poem full of 'life' aptly suited to the ambience.. lovely. Touchwood :)

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  10. I do this rarely.

    "Awwww"

    I mean it.

    All smiles.

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  11. kyun main zindagi ki baat manta raha aur kyun zindagi mujhe kabhi samajh na saki

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  12. @kush ji,arunesh ji...thank you so much for liking the poem...

    @virendra singh ji....I'm in best of spirits....this poem is just showing my positive outlook of life...thank you for reading...and your best wishes....God Bless!

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  13. @devesh: thanks a lot for your encouraging words!

    @divesh:you nicely co-related everything...:)..and thanks a tonne for that 'Touchwood' :)

    @mangoman: smiles back to you ..:)...thanks!

    @rajat:zindagi nahi samajhti...hamein hi samajhna hota hai...:)

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  14. बहुत ही सुंदर .... एक एक पंक्तियों ने मन को छू लिया ...

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  15. हमेशा की तरह ये पोस्ट भी बेह्तरीन है
    कुछ लाइने दिल के बडे करीब से गुज़र गई....

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  16. Nice poems saumya!! I'm not well versed in Hindi, but managed to understand it after several attempts.
    :)

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  17. hmmm...quite liked the positive feel...
    n the line "ae zindagi tu hume raas aane lagi hai..".

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  18. so true..
    wenever my frnd was in trouble or sad he used to say this
    'life is beautiful'
    and it truely is :)

    p.s wat is sreekhay

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  19. @committed to life: yeah,life is beautiful :)

    'sareekhay' means 'resemblence of'

    @sajal : thanks!

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  20. sakaratmak ravaiya liye bahut sunder kavita....

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  21. Hello Saumya,

    Very good imaginative words and wonderful expression. I liked your preception and the way you projected it in such beautiful words...

    Regards...

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  22. thank you so much Dimps ....stay happy..:)

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Thankyou for reading...:)