Friday, June 4, 2010

गम



तारों संग कल गुफ्तगू में हमने
कुछ एक गम जाहिर किये थे

सुना है पूरी रात बारिश हुई है| 

~Saumya 


गुफ्तगू=conversation,जाहिर=express


26 comments:

  1. खूबसूरत जी बहुत खूबसूरत.....

    आँखों में चमक के साथ कुछ और भी महसूस हुआ जी इसे पढ़ कर.....

    कुंवर जी,

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  2. सार्थक और बेहद खूबसूरत,प्रभावी,उम्दा रचना है..शुभकामनाएं।

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  3. वाह ! कितनी सुन्दर पंक्तियाँ हैं ... मन मोह लिया इस चित्र ने तो !

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  4. वाह! त्रिवेणी

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  5. @kunwarji,sanjay ji,aayushi and kush ji...thanks a lot....

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  6. Heyy...Saumya di..you're shreya's big sister na,you both are supergenius....I m ur big fan...All ur poems are wonderful and deep in thoughts..I get lost reading them...I am sure u will emerge as a great and famous writer...best wishes to you..Tulika

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  7. First time I felt like I'm going through the real writer's writing. It doesn't mean other bloggers aren't good wirter. It means you are simply outstanding..... Going through your blog is a real treat. Thanks for such a nice blog writing.

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  8. @tulika: thank you soo much dear...I'm glad you liked my poems...god bless!....love ya

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  9. @Virendra Singh ji :thank you for this honour....it really feels great when you receive such comments....God bless....thanks again for being here.

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  10. Listen Girl!
    You write very well! But more than that what I was impressed by was your description.....
    I believe that imagination is stronger than knowledge -- myth is more potent than history -- dreams are more powerful than facts -- hope always triumphs over experience -- laughter is the cure for grief -- love is stronger than death...
    May your tribe grow! By the way, I too belong to the same.....

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  11. awesomeness.. sometimes I feel that my pain gets communicated to God and he too sits and cries with me..

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  12. itna gham ki baarish ho gayi...should i comment on the impact of the lines or the pain inside?? guess i just did on both!

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  13. thanks a lot divesh,rajat and vivek....

    @ashish: thank you so much for being here...I'm glad you liked the 'description'....hope we all incorporate the same ...

    @mangoman: yeah you did on both...:)....thanks

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  14. waah..triveni ki duniya me pehla kadam...behtareen!

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  15. Very nicely written...
    Painful...

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  16. Ultimate...
    Awaiting more TRIVENI's.

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  17. one more time.... u at ur best!.... :)

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Thankyou for reading...:)